Genre: Adventure, Romance
Status: In Progress
• Teen • • 4271 words
Travis was never treated right back in Manehattan. He never had friends, or even basic respect. just because he was considered a freak. well, A creature born in a different dimension and raised in Equestria isn't exactly the most natural thing in the world. On his birthday, Travis is given the chance to live on his own for one year in the local town of Ponyville.
Date: 23 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
If it's really not whatever you said it was, make that clear in your description WITHOUT directly addressing the audience. Figure out your story's hook and hook the audience with it.