MLP-OF - Secret thoughts (commentary)
by SparkStone
Characters: Mane 6
Canon: S2
Genre: Human Crossover
Pairing: None
POV: 1st
Status: In Progress
Warnings: None
• Almost Everypony •

Hear the thoughts of our adventure tackling heroes!

Series: My Little Pony - Otherworldly Friends
Chapters: 4
Word count: 1080 Read count: 1315
Published: 28 May 2013 Updated: 03 Sep 2013
Story Notes:

Listen to what the ponies or the humans have to say about their day so far. You'll never know what you might uncover!

The idea was brought up by Alisa to add more secrets revealed to the story, so why not? We will hold a collection of the same episodes that will have a narrator telling what they thought about it. We won't do all the episodes, but we will do ones that have certain things to let you know about.

Twilight's thoughts on Episode 1 by SparkStone
Author's Notes:

Twilight's thoughts when they all first met the humans.

Twilight's Thoughts

This was one weird day. First a creature called a "human" falls out of the sky and tells us he's from another world called USA. I was very surprised to find out that these humans have such amazing technology as to tell them about our world. They don't seem too fond to talk about it though, but I guess I shouldn't bother asking.

Since they know so much about us, they seem to immediatly trust us. I wonder if I could trust them...I mean they've been so kind so far, Aleu even woke up at night to check up on me. I hope they're good humans, they really seem capable to build a bond with. In fact, I've already felt a spark in our bond lighting up.

They also seem quite fun, seeing them race with Pinkie Pie. Lucy and Pinkie seem to already be the best of friends. Even thought there is a age difference.

Balkin also seems quite athletic, but not enough to beat Applejack. I kinda worry for Aleu though, he seems to get so tired easily. but then again, he did fall from the sky.

Everypony seems to be happy so far, trust and friendship has already formed between us...except Rainbow Dash. She seems to be highly suspicous of them, I hope she can learn to trust them too, and not do anything crazy.

Oh my...thinking about this made my head hurt...I better get some sleep...Tomorrow will be the first day the humans spend their time in our world. I wonder what they'll do.

End Notes:

Twilight sure is happy to meet new friends she barely knows about! good to know! maybe this would've been more fun with Aleu's point of view. Well if you'd like to hear another side of their thoughts, contact me by using the review here.

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