Reviews For Shallo Diamonds
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Reviewer: Mazamis Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2012 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

YAY UPDATE... Wait, you have been super busy playing that isac game and killing floor with me.... seems legit...

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Date: 20 Mar 2012 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 2

very good,  catchy and intresting. hope you update more frequently, but I can not say shit because I haven't updated in like 2 months. Keep up the good work. I'm going to play portal 2 now, hopefully no get a dumbass as my parnter...

*Mazamis slaps Basil Lecher around a bit with a large fishbot.

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Date: 11 Feb 2012 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

well well well we meet again....

actually it was vary good I saw one version of a body instead of pony but it was still good. not alot of visuial discriptions but your form of a letter kinda cancels that out asuming that the parents know what their kid looks like and what the school already kinda looks like. Its funny when you mentioned the chess I imanged sweete belle hopping diagonaly from tile to tile. I still like the lack of discription though as I stated it lets my mid wander and imangine it how I want to. for me I imagine our protaganist looking some-what like Sweete Belle BUT thats me. In my opinion it would expand your type of discriptions and view-ponit if it wasnt in a letter form because it would allow you to express exactly what your character thinks. OVER-ALL Very good chapter was decent length (well mine are only on avarage 1100 words) so I expect it to be updated maybe twice a week (assuming on how I work, I can upadte maybe two chapters a day). I will be following this story not only because you are a friend but because I enjoyed it. I give it a 9-10 

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