Date: 14 May 2012 5:12 AM Title: Aftermath
The End? Its good but it coulda been nicer if somehow Atlas & P-body found a barely functioning Caroline... This just makes Me wanna go punch a computer And all the story Rocks Its just that ending is so.... Bittersweet I just hate GlaDos though soo. Kudos on the great fic
Date: 13 Apr 2012 10:57 AM Title: Wheatley, You Moron
Nice, job. I really enjoyed the story. Usually, people who write crossovers like this are gamers who don't know the difference detween your and you're, and that really irks me. But this one had fine grammar, and a great story. It even has a setup for a sequel. You managed to have all the Mane Six characters, as well as two more, without forgetting anypony. Keep it up.
Date: 09 Sep 2011 11:20 PM Title: Wheatley, You Moron
I looked at the authors, and I saw it was the same ones as past sins. They did not disappoint with a fantastic story.
Date: 05 Sep 2011 1:13 AM Title: Wheatley, You Moron
Stories have ideas of fantasies in which men and ladies have always inspire the minds in an escalation of art.
Of the course the question when it comes to crossover are sometimes...horrid and such doesn't blend well with sweet and bitter. I personally despise much of it.
However your story is different, and I've read the chapters from start to finish and I must say it is, good
Yours is an exception cause the plot is well played and humor with how Glados can use mental torture against the mane 6 and others. A very twisty story, but little bit to much for me.
So I'm giving this score, 9/10. Like Dark-Castle mentioned, do not disappoint me, and I hope you for the best of your godly writing skills.
Date: 30 Aug 2011 6:12 PM Title: Wheatley, You Moron
This story was like blending two completely different drinks together, at first it may seem like it won't work, but after you've given it a try, your instantly hooked on it, tis story managed to capture the personalities of two different universes and blend them together without having to change either of them, the ponies stayed kid friendly while interacting with the deadly GLaDOS, I'm eager for more work from this author, do not disappoint me.
Date: 12 Jul 2011 4:19 PM Title: Aftermath
I must say good job. you did a relly well at coneting the two univers and as a fan of MLP and portal. I think you did a great job in capturing the personalities from both universes. But I must say bravo fantastic work