Reviews For A Rainbow in the Twilght
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Reviewer: Torra Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2014 10:03 PM Title: Early in the Morning

Short and sweet. Next!

4/5

Reviewer: Torra Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2014 9:59 PM Title: Hungover From Last Night.

Yay! much better. ONWARD!!!

4/5

Reviewer: Torra Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2014 9:40 PM Title: A Rainbow in the Twilight

Bit of a stiff read. Some lines just read like bad actors reading a script. I like your story, its really cute. some spelling errors here and there. Ive read some stories where it seemed like robots acting a play, zero emotion. Moving on to next chapter <3

3 out of 5 

Reviewer: Death2924 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 7:00 PM Title: Early in the Morning

I think this is very good. Keep it up and you will have a great story one your hands. I'm really excited to see where this goes.Keep up the good work! 

Reviewer: myzury Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2012 10:59 AM Title: A Rainbow in the Twilight

LOVE i plz make more of this



Author's Response:

I will, that can be assured. I got a new computer and the file didn't transfer over but I'll find a way! I love hearing that my work is appreciated! Thanks

Reviewer: Dazu Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 9:23 AM Title: A Rainbow in the Twilight

Felt a little rushed. Wish there was more.



Author's Response:

You want more? You got it! Working on it now :), about being rushed. My first fan-fic, it's amazing that there's not more haters :D

Reviewer: Ag Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 1:23 AM Title: A Rainbow in the Twilight

Don't five-star your own story if you care what people think about it.

 

The fic's not the worst I've read, but it's not great. Your form isn't bad; no major typos or paragraph errors. The problem is the story; it all just feels a bit contrived. Rainbow Dash loves Twilight? Why? Don't just drop that on us in the first paragraph; set it up. 



Author's Response:

You make a good point or two but the story is mostly about what happens because of that relationship not about the relationship. Thanks for the critisism!

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