Reviews For Domestic Nuclear Shelters in Equestria
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Reviewer: Greypon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting but the terms people and persons get intermixed with pony and ponies. Should be consistant with ponies. In the supply section, it is mentioned having meat products. Ponies don't eat meat.

Author's Response:

Thank you Greypon3 for your comment. Your changes have been taken into consideration.

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