Reviews For A lovely Afternoon
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Reviewer: Flutterdash94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 3:48 PM Title: A Lovely Afternoon

I also have a kik its ApexDash

Reviewer: Flutterdash94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 3:44 PM Title: A Lovely Afternoon

I think its nicley done story line wise. It could definitly use edditing. I also get the feeling that you didnt proof read or have annother pony proof read. Keep up the good work and i look forward to more stories from you.



Author's Response:

Thank you I actually haven't used this site in quite some time and both of the stories that I posted here were more or less rough drafts. I have more polished versions posted here http://www.fimfiction.net/user/theomegabrony

At Fim Fiction.net they seem to have a more active community there.

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