Date: 14 Aug 2011 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really good story, nice job with the rhyming. Also plausible. Plus I love the ship. 10 stars for epicness.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
I indeed love it. Grand excellent to read. My heart was in suspense for the final glee.
So you could say it is a great work and I applaud you for making it.