Date: 08 Sep 2014 5:10 PM Title: The Legend of Princess Silver Frost Part 1
The story is pretty good so far. You just need to work on your spelling a bit, and not have all the writing in one paragraph. Since the writing is so small, it's pretty easy to lose where you're reading. But once you fix those, it will look A LOT better.
thanks for the input i will fix that right now. :)