Reviews For Darkness in Sweetie Belle
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Reviewer: Dragor Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2013 9:55 PM Title: Prologue

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Reviewer: CartsBeforeHorses Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2013 5:55 PM Title: Prologue

Needs some improvement.



Author's Response:

I welcome eny negative or positive criticism. But 'Needs some improvement.' is not much to go on.

If you could be more specific that would be great. 

If you have some ideas you can write them here:

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