Date: 10 Sep 2013 5:36 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen - Explorers in the Old Fashioned Sense
finally dude you really needed to add them earlier in the story I had to skip to this chapter cause I got bored and finally I see the humans seriously dude what kept you from adding them to the story? sorry if I insulted you I normally don't leave negative reviews
I'm really bad at updating these other sites. All my stuff is posted at fanfiction.noprestige.com. I post it all there first, and I usually wait a while before updating any other site. Then I forget for the longest time.
Why'd it take so long to get the two groups to meet? Because I had a lot of exposition to cover first. Just that simple.
Date: 11 May 2012 6:37 AM Title: Chapter Two - Internal Conflicts
Hmmmm I don't know enough stargate to know this but Its good im still reading and i will be homest if i don't leave a review i either loathed it or i was too emotional to say anything. Keep on writing brony.