Plot Critic and Reviewer needed!

[Party Pony]

My stories, Guards and Agents, have very little feedback. Agents actually has no feedback. I need a second, or third opinion on the stories. I need to know if the readers are actually enjoying them, or if I'm boring them to death. If you can help, I would appritiate any constructive criticism and reviews on the stories. Thank you!

[Party Pony]

Here is the link for Guards:

http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/ ... &warning=9

[Party Pony]

Here is the link for Agents:

http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/ ... p?sid=1129

Note: This story is still a work in progress.