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My first fanfic ever... proof read.

PostPosted: Tue Oct 30, 2012 9:31 pm
by Moon werewolf
This is my first fanfic ever, and my english isn't that good so i know the are grammar and spelling mistakes. But I still want to hear what you think, and what i can improve on (other than the grammar)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aXh ... s0xPQ/edit